1. Speaking pace was good. 2. Volume of recording was perfect. 3. You included some interesting facts: That she served as president of the college and that her husband died in office.
Weaknesses
1. Pronunciation needed improvement. Examples include the following: a. You said Latin without pronouncing the “T.” b. You mispronounced her name 2. Some hesitation in your presentation was noticeable. 3. You should have named the surviving siblings. 4. You didn’t develop the more interesting facts, such as how long did she serve as President of the college or include more details about her husband’s death. 5. You said nothing about her role in the White House.
Good it was very good.
ReplyDeleteSlurring to much
ReplyDeleteGood facts
Good length
-Brett B.
Jeff Myers
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Speaking pace was good.
2. Volume of recording was perfect.
3. You included some interesting facts: That she served as president of the college and that her husband died in office.
Weaknesses
1. Pronunciation needed improvement. Examples include the following: a. You said Latin without pronouncing the “T.” b. You mispronounced her name
2. Some hesitation in your presentation was noticeable.
3. You should have named the surviving siblings.
4. You didn’t develop the more interesting facts, such as how long did she serve as President of the college or include more details about her husband’s death.
5. You said nothing about her role in the White House.
Overall grade: 24/30 B-